七年级英语作文,有错没有

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七年级英语作文,有错没有
Carol and her friends went to a farm yesterday.They were happy very much
It was a sunny day.When Carol and her friends got to the farm.Some farmers showed their farmer to Carol.Carol saw a lot of things in the farm
First,she saw some cows and she milked a cow.Because hse thought it was interesting to milk a cow.After that,she saw some chickens but she didn't feed them.Then they went for a walk around the farm.They were enjoy going for a walk.Because the air is clean.At last,Carol and her friends picked some strawberries and took some home.
They were happy yesterday.And the learned a lot about farming from farmers.They thought.if they can come the farm again.They will do more things what they didn't do.

答案

Some farmers showed their farmer to Carol.应该是Some farmers showed their farm to Carol.或Some farmers showed their farmers to Carol.Because hse thought it was interesting to milk a cow.您是想写Becaus...