帮我看看这几段英文有没有错误呀?

题目

帮我看看这几段英文有没有错误呀?
Life,I was a positive and uplifting,very carefully and I was confident personality characteristics,However,a lack of skills sexual given me a lot of restrictions,They played a very important role in my life.As accounting students more important is the combination of knowledge and practice.in the accounting practice,on their professional knowledge to a deeper understanding of the weak,and unable to learn to apply their knowledge to practice,to a certain extent so as to bring their own difficulties.Fortunately,however,is that I have the personality characteristics help me,I expected it to the accuracy of the completion of the task.
晕.就说很多?

答案

太多了,I am positiveand uplifting ,后面的应该i have confident personality.lack of sexual skills 不应该是given 而是bringsthey have playedapply ...for 而不是 to to such an extent that bring them difficu...