帮我看看这几段英文有没有什么错误（我写的）

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帮我看看这几段英文有没有什么错误（我写的）
是几段关于大兴安岭的文字,因为老师要求做课件
1.Green is the spirit of Ta Hsing-an Ling,that is to say,it means life.
The ocean of the trees is the meaning of it,and there are hundreds of animals and thousands of trees living here.
As you see,Ta Hsing-an Ling is just like a paradise of plants,and it is the only pure land now…
2.Blue is the colour of sky and streams.
I’m sure Ta Hsing-an Ling’s blue is more beautiful than a picture.Here in Ta Hsing-an Ling,water hids in forests– but it cannot stop you to find its beauty.
Here are some tourist spot for you:
Yanzhigou (胭脂沟）
It is part of Emu-er River,about 14 km long,and it is famous for its high production capability of gold.It has been known by us for more than 100 years,but you can still find gold here now!
Beiyinquan （北饮泉）
You can drink the water here directly.The water is also good for your health.
3.The time for orange is the time for gains.
If you walk into the forests,you may find

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略作改动,一家之言,谨供参考.1.The spirit of Ta Hsing-an Ling is green, a color which reminds you vigorous life and immense forest, with hundreds of animals and thousands of trees inside.When you come h...