英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
需要给老外回邮件,英文不那么好,我想回复的内容如下,我自己的翻译也附上,请教英语好的同学帮助指点语法错误,
“谢谢您提供的数据,我们今天已经完成了这4条数据,但是没有成功的电话.
对于无人接听的电话我们执行两天拨打四遍的规则,以下是最后的拨打结果供您参考.
如有问题请随时联系我,”
“Thanks for providing these data for us,we have finished these 4 leads today,but made 0 successful call.
For no answer datas we follow 4 times 2 days policy,and the summary is as following for your reference.
If you have any problem,please feel free to let me know.”

答案

"Thanks for the data that you have provided for us,and today we have completed the 4 pieces of data,but no successful calls.
For unanswered phones,we perform the rules for two days called for four times ,and here are last call results which are provided for your reference.
If you have any questions please contact me any time,thank you.”