短文改错 共十处错误 求质量

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短文改错 共十处错误 求质量
My mother is a person who always puts the needs of others ahead hers.It is of importance to her that those around her feels happy and comfortable.Anyone who visits her will be offering much delicious food.My mom loves to see people enjoy her wonderfully cooking,and often gives food to the homeless.She can always find time to borrow a hand to those who are in need.She has raised up four children.She has been the amazing mother.She does hers best to make us feel that we're the most important people with her world.

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My mother is a person who always puts the needs of others ahead (加入of) hers.It is of importance (to改成for) her that those around her (feels改成feel) happy and comfortable.Anyone who visits her will be (offering改成offered) much delicious food.My mom loves to see people enjoy her (wonderfully改成wonderful) cooking,and often gives food to the homeless.She can always find time to (borrow改成lend/give) a hand to those who are in need.She has raised (去掉up) four children.She has been (the改成an) amazing mother.She does (hers改成her) best to make us feel that we're the most important people (with改成in) her world.