帮忙看看这篇英语文章有哪里不对或不足 改改
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帮忙看看这篇英语文章有哪里不对或不足 改改
自己翻译的 认为有很多中式句子,
要做演讲用
The most out of the common in UK is the traffic,because the traffic there is very interesting.There are only a few traffic accidents that took place in UK.
The traffic lights in UK are better than those in China.They can be controlled artificially.For example,if there is no car around us and the traffic light is red,we can press a red button.We can save our time.This plan is very humanistic.
The drivers in UK almost never drive after drinking alcohol or make noise.People always comply with traffic rules.The street is usually very quiet.
I had to buy the special ticket for a week because of the far way,and went to school by bus.Each bus stop had a bus time table.There was a map,the bus number and time on it.First time,I didn't understand its meaning,but I tried my best and knew it at last.I was very excited!
The cars' s driving direction in UK is the opposite of that in China.It keep right in China,but keep left in UK.I felt unaccustomed at first,especially when I wanted to cross the road,I always looked at left.But it became better after I went to school by bus.
"You can view a car show around the city road." our guide said," No two cars are the same those in the ten cars around you."
I think the traffic in UK is better than that in China.This is related to the quality of the British,because they are very polite.Now I know why there are a lot of accidents in China.
I hope that Chinese can learn from British.I hope that there will be less traffic jam in China.I hope that there will be fewer accidents in China.I hope that the traffic in China will be better.
答案
1.第二段第一句 加上 system 比较合理,因为你要说的是红绿灯系统比中国好,而不是说他们的红绿灯比中国好!2.if there is no car around us and the traffic light is red,可以改为if the traffic light is red withou...
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