求英语大神帮校对这篇短篇英语自我介绍演讲稿有无语法错误或其他,

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求英语大神帮校对这篇短篇英语自我介绍演讲稿有无语法错误或其他,
Hi every one,I am Sophia.Today I have a self-introduction.I am a 13years old girl.I come from Bibo Primary School and I am glad to study in SZ Foreign Language School.Ilike my new school because the school is beautiful,and teachers are funny.I also like my new class and I make lots of friends here.Like Ivy,Teresa,Amily and so on.Ivy is smart and kind.Teresa is really qute.
I like reading and drawing in my share time,.I love reading science fiction books like《harry potter>and 《the hunger games》.I like drawing and i like art class the best.It's interesting.So,when I grow up,I want to be a artist.Where there is a will,there is a way.I think if I hard enough,I will success.
求大神帮校对有无语法错误,尽量帮我改良从句!ORZ

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Hi everyone!I am Sophia.Today I have the honour to introduce to you.I am a 13-year-old girl.I come from Bibo Primary School and I am glad to study in SZ Foreign Language School.I like my new school be...