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麻烦帮我修改下这篇英语作文
I had a dream that I wanted to be a doctor since I was young.
Doctor is hallowed job that to drive out the pain from the sick man.That's one of the reason that why i wanted to be a doctor,but that's only half part of my dream.
Another part of my dream is I want to Learn more about the medical side of things.
Dream is beauty.I do not know how to achieve,but the truth to tell us:no dream,no hope.If nobody had dreamed of flying like a bird inside the sky,we should never have known that a machine called plane could bring us to the places in the air.So what will happen if everyone has a dream and get down to making it come true?There is nothing impossible if we started to dream it and do it.
I have a dream to prove I am alive,I am alive to realize my dream.

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I have a dream that I can be a doctor since I was young.
Doctor is hallowed job which can drive out the pain from the sicks.But that's only one of the reasons that I want to be a doctor.Another reason is that I want to learn more about the medical knowledge.
Dream is beauty.I do not know how to achieve,but the truth tells me:no dream,no hope.If nobody had dreamed of flying like a bird inside the sky,we would never have known a machine called plane that could bring us to the places in the air.So let us think what will happen if everyone has a dream and make it come true?Nothing is impossible if we start to dream and get down it.
So I will insist on my dream and realize my dream.