请各位英语达人帮忙修改一下作文

题目

请各位英语达人帮忙修改一下作文
假设你是某学生杂志的编辑Diana,收到了读者Steve的一封信,信中倾述了他目前的烦恼,请根据提示写一封回信
与人交流：课上参与小组讨论,表达自己的想法；课间和同学交流
表达善意：主动问候同学；对同友好；帮助同学
参加活动：积极参加班级活动
Dear Diana,
I just came yo a new school.And I can't get on well with my new new classmates...What should I do?
回信：
Dear Steve,
I've learned about your problems.I think you can try to talk with other people in the
recreation .In the class, you should join the group work and express your thoughs.It can help you to communicate with others better.You should be friendly to everyone and smile to your teacher and classmates whenyou meet them.You also should often take part in the class activities like sports meetings.Not only relax youself,but also make more friends.
Don't be very worried about that things.I beilive that you can get on well with others.
帮帮忙,修改一下.最好能帮我另写一篇比较好的,或是把我的作文换一些好的句子

答案

I have learned about your problems.I have some advice, and I hope you can think about that. First, you can communicate with others. During the class, you can join in the group discusion. Don't be a...