几篇英语作文,提意见加修改～

题目

几篇英语作文,提意见加修改～
《新概念》的作文,或者有什么还可以简化的地方,提提意见～
1.last year in France I gave a lift to a young "French".I just know a few words of French,so we sat in silence except for the greeting of French.I had not known he was English himself until he said "Do you speak English?" in the end.
2.I felt nervous when I went into the office of Mr.Harmsworth,who wanted to see me.He said that twenty people had already left because business was bad and the firm couldn't pay such large salaries,but to my surprise,he didn't ask me to leave!
3.Traffic police don't usually give you a ticket if you park your car in the wrong places,for example,when I was on holiday in sweden,I found a polite noto to want me to pay attention to the street signs in my car.Everyone can't fail to obey a request like this.
可是总有错误吧～起码我个人觉得还不好～

答案

1.第二句注意时态,改成I only knew a few words in French,so we sat in silence except for greeting each other in French.要用IN这里不应该用OF.第三句I did not know he was English until he said.用一般过去式...