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英语不错的帮我修改这篇文章好吗?
Dear Mr Green,
I see your factory CD(广告）,I very like the job,I'm a fourteen boy student.I'm outgoing ,and I like talking with others.My favorive sport is basketball.So I usually write some stories about basketball.And I'm interested to interviewed players.I hope you can use me .
Sun

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Dear Mr Green,I saw your factory ads.I like the job very much.I'm a student of 14 ,an outgoing boy.And I like talking with others.My favorive sport is basketball.So I usually write some stories about ...