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英语好的,帮我看看这篇英语短文
There is a traditional festival in China called Lantern Festival.It is on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month.Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals,vegetables,fruits and many,other things.On the eve of Lantern Festival,all the lanterns are hung up.Many people like eating rice glue balls、watching the lion dance and guessing the riddle at the Lantern Festival.Do you know the ‘guess the riddle’?It’s a interesting game.People write the riddles on the laterns,and let others guess.The rice glue balls are traditional Chinese food.Do you like eating them?I thank them are very delicious.
帮忙看看有没有什么语法、单复数或者时态错误,修改下.最好还能把其中Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals,vegetables,fruits and many,other things.On the eve of Lantern Festival,all the lanterns are hung up.这两句改成一般现在时.

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There is a traditional festival in China called Lantern Festival.It is (It is held) on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month. Lanterns are made in the shape (shapes) of different animals, vegetables, fr...