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Rapidly increasing petrol price could protect the environment and release traffic pressure to some extent.Do u agree or disagree?Give your opinion.
In 21st century,the petrol price is rapidly growing,leaving a series of problems.Some believe that it’s a positive way to alleviate traffic junctions and protect the environment.However,others opposite.Before drawing my conclusion,let’s take a glimpse at both sides.
To begin with,the increasingly growing petrol price would subliminally negatively affects culture economy.For instance,transportation fee would be directly influenced,resulting the high price of raw material collecting for the governments.To continue,individuals would suffer a lot from high petrol price.One’s daily activities would be limited.Travelling around by private car as a after work amusement become impossible due to the sky-high petrol price.I imagine some folks will be more likely to walk the quarter-mile to the 7-Eleven than to drive.
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