请英语高人帮忙看一句话是否有语法错误

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请英语高人帮忙看一句话是否有语法错误
Only in this wa can our country be more and more beautiful and only in this way can our society be more and more harmonious to live in.
若有其他错误也望指教~

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同一个句子中尽量避免用相同的动词和相同的词组,比如说only in this way e more and more.重复着用会让人读着很拗口,同时很累赘,也在向别人说明着你的词汇量的匮乏.你可以这样表述：only by this way can our coun...