帮我检查一下我写的这篇英语作文（初一的）“My family day”

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帮我检查一下我写的这篇英语作文（初一的）“My family day”
My family day
My father usually gets up at six thirty.But my mother usually gets up at seven thirty .At eight o'clock,my father and my mother eat breastfast.Then my father usually goes to work at eight thirty.My mother usually takes a shower at eight thirty.At nine o'clock,my father is still working,my mother shops for the vegetable .My father gets home at eleven o'clock.My mother goes to cook our lunch at eleven o'clock .In the afternoon,my father goes to work at fourteen o'clock ,and gets home at nineteen o'clock .My mother goes to work at thirteen o'clock and goes home at twenty o'clock.We usually eat dinner at twenty-one o'clock and go to bed at twenty-two o'clock.
文章的汉语内容就不用了,就看一下语法啊拼写啊,用法这些的,
我知道有点长，可是请大家认真一点检查。尤其这句“At nine o'clock,my father is still working,my mother shops for the vegetable ”
二楼，正是因为我写的英文作文不好所以才要练习、修改，我又不是因为要分数才写的。

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