请高手帮改两篇四级作文

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请高手帮改两篇四级作文
My attitude towards cars
car is a means of transportation.With a car,we are able to travel anywhere we want as long as there is a road.
cars has shortened the distance of different areas,the world becomes smaller.with an appliance which can go up to over one hundred km per hour,we can easily enjoy our voyage from cities to cities.If my mother wants to go shopping,she does not need to take a bus where there are so many people.with cars,posters don't need to learn to ride a horse for sending letters,it would be more efficient and safer for them by using cars instead of other dangerous and exhausting means.
Therefore,I believe that cars have changed us a lot.It goes without saying that cars will influence people's life for a long time.
Are names important?
Is one's name important to him?well,in my opinion,my answer would be positive.
My name is Cong cong,which means clever in Chinese.It was my dear parents that gave me the name.It is a symbol of love.They attach their earnest affection and bright expectation to the name for the purpose of my becoming cleverer and cleverer..
subsequently,I respect my parents,I love them.With this name,I know what my parents expect me to do.Thus,in my whole school life,I worked hard and finally sunceeded in entering a university.I was always looking forward to satisfying them by becoming a well-behaved and clever student.During the long period of time,some friends sometimes mock at my name because it sounds like a little child's name,but in my heart,they don't understand and will never understand how my name is important to me.
In consequence,I hold the notion that one's name is significant for him.One's name is not only what others call you,it's a symbol of his parents' love and expectations for him as well.

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Car means transportation.With a car,we can go traveling anywhere as far as we wants.Cars have shortened the distance of different areas,so the world becomes smaller with an appliance which can going u...