如何改正.急

题目

如何改正.急
The reason is that the customers have found intimacy from here.Also,it is easier to communicate between employees and them.The goods therefore are easier to sale.As a result,the supermarket increased 10% profit in this month.

答案

The reason is that the customers have found intimacy from here.---found intimacy表达不妥.改为felt intimacy.Also,it is easier to communicate between employees and them.---also放这里不太好.后面感觉也不...