英语作文语法检测,

题目

英语作文语法检测,
My Winter Holiday
Time flies,the winter holiday is over.The winter holiday is from January 7th to February 24th,it has forty-eight days.
I get up very late.I usually get up at nine o’clock.Then I have breakfast.I often eat bread and eggs,drink some milk.I read some books after breakfast.I have lunch at my grandfather’s home.At two o’clock in the afternoon,my mother goes to work,I do my home -work.I have supper at seven o’clock.In the evening,I play on the computer.I go to sleep late.
During the Spring Festival,I feel very happy.I visit my uncles and aunts.I get some luck money.
Next term is coming,I well work hard.I well listen to the teachers in classes.I must do anything carefully.
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答案

My Winter Holiday
Time flies,the winter holiday is over.The winter holiday is(was) from January 7th to February 24th,it has forty-eight days.
I get(got) up very late.I usually get(got) up at nine o’clock.Then I have(had) breakfast.I often eat(ate) bread and eggs,drink(drinking) some milk.I read some books after breakfast.I have(had) lunch at my grandfather’s home.At two o’clock in the afternoon,my mother goes (went)to work,I do(did) my home -work.I have(had) supper at seven o’clock.In the evening,I play (played)on the computer.I go (went)to sleep late.
During the Spring Festival,I feel(felt) very happy.I visit (visited)my uncles and aunts.I get(got) some luck (lucky)money.
Next term is coming,I well(will) work hard.I well(will) listen to the teachers in classes(class).I must do anything carefully.