英语错题改错During the weekend I traveled by the air for the first time in my life.

题目

英语错题改错During the weekend I traveled by the air for the first time in my life.
During the weekend I traveled by the air for the first time in my life.I usual travel by train or bus.It's both cheaper and safe.But to fly in the sky was something new to me.At the end Ifelt a little nervous.But very soon I became exciting when Ifound me high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains,fields,river and so on were interestingly small.I enjoy the frightening and comfortable journey very much.After all,it is more interesting take a plane than to take a car.
帮我指出错误在哪里改成别的什么.

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the air中的the删掉,usual加上ly,both...and改为not only...but also,safe加r,to fly改成flying .At the end 改为In the end,exciting改为excited,among改为in,river加s,take前加to.