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Li Yuchun is my favorite star.She is very handsome,but also very cute,there are many people like her.I am one of them.In the summer of 2005,I have known her.She has a little face,her skin is very good.Small eyes,thin lips.She's a very good typhoon,there are powerful voices.She did not like the make-up,do not like to cry.She likes to eat,who likes to sleep,but how long are not fat.Her favorite song is "Autumn leave".I also like the song.She has a lot of love for her,she was concerned about the fans.They are crazy and fervor.I like Li Yuchun,but I just quietly support her.I believe she will be singing on the road further and further away.

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Li Yuchun is my favourite star.She is not only very handsome,but also very cute,many people like her.I am one of them.In the summer of 2005,I knew her.She has a round face,and her skin is very good.Sh...