谁帮我看看语句通不通顺4

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谁帮我看看语句通不通顺4
My good friend
His name is YangZiQiang,he is 13 years old.He is fat,eyes are small.He likes his bicycle and likes to play ping-pong with me together.
格式呢？开头是不是空两格？
还有
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13(thirteen) years old.There are 4(four) persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.I love my family.I like playing with my lovely younger brother.I like painting.my dream is to become a painter.

答案

My good friend
His name is Yang Zi Qiang.He is 13 years old.He is fat and his eyes are small.He likes his bicycle and likes to play ping-pong with me.
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问题补充：格式呢?开头是不是空两格?
是的,开头要空两格
His name is
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My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13 years old.There are four members in my family.They are my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.I love my family.I like playing with my lovely younger brother.I like painting.My dream is to become a painter.
数目字若是单位数,即1或4等
一般是用字母串出来,即 one ,four
如果是三位数或以上,即用阿拉伯数目表达,即124...
两位数字即串出来或用阿拉伯数目均可
这里用member(成员)来代替person
原文语法没有问题
但用member意思会好一点