谁帮我看看语句通不通顺2

题目

谁帮我看看语句通不通顺2
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13 years old.There are 4 persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.I like painting,my dream is to become a painter.把汉语也写在下面~
帮我用英语介绍小眼睛、胖同学的英语短文（好朋友）要有中文！

答案

你的英文不错嘛,仅仅建议更改一个单词my younger brother and I（me）.
my classmate is very fat and with small eyes, and he's my good friend
我的同学小眼睛,很肥,他是我的好朋友