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An optional course on English
Time goes by,I have studied this optional course for a term.I like English ,That’s why I choose English for my optional course.When I first came into this classroom,I felt very excited.I thought everyone here loved English.And I first saw my optional course teacher.It is a man.He usually gives us a test paper to fill in.And then he will ask some of us to say what he or she chose ,and why.Then correct it.I got a lot of knowledge .And I felt very interesting.
On Friday afternoon,my mood is always very good.I can do what I love to do ,you know ,this feeling is excellent.
Then I am going to say something on this course.How much English knowledge did my teacher teach us I think first ,the vacabulary,He took one or two lessons on it.Then ,grammar,it’s important.And last,reading and writing,teacher taught us a lot of English words ,English manners and so on .Don’t worry,I ‘ve forgot one thing.Teacher also gave us a test.Oh,I haven’t got a good mark.I was very sad.
I’m satisfied with this optional course.Though it’s an optional course,but no one has done anything wasn’t link with the class.It gave me a very good time,a peace time,a time I will never forget.
I hope to take part in it next time!
有英语课，但选修课里也有英语课，我喜欢英语，所以选英语

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I like English ,that’s why I chose it as my optional course.And I first saw my optional course teacher,who is a man.Then he corrects it.And I felt it's very interesting.Then I am going to say somethi...