老师让写一篇英语的自我介绍,至少80词,我写了一篇,有很多错误（比如用词不当等等）,求改,悬赏自提.

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老师让写一篇英语的自我介绍,至少80词,我写了一篇,有很多错误（比如用词不当等等）,求改,悬赏自提.
我刚六年级毕业,这篇是交给中学老师的,可以的话麻烦再用自己的话翻译一下,看是否符合我的本意,原文如下：
Hello everyone. My name is ××××× ×××. Nice to meet you. I am a friendly boy. I like to make something interesting. I like computer very much. I can use the computer to draw some beautiful pictures. And I can do something else with computer. I like science, too. I love everything but I dislike sports. I always stay at home every day in every summer holidays. I usually stay at home to study, use computer to draw pictures, play games and do something else. Now, new term is beginning. The life of middle school is beginning, too. I should do everything better than before. I’ll do more exercise and study hardly. I think I can do that. Can you be my friend? Let’s study together!
最好能在今天改出来,急用

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Hello everyone. My name is ××××× ×××. Nice to meet you. I am a friendly boy. I like to make something interesting. I like computer very much. I can use the computer to draw some beautiful pict...