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帮忙看看这句英语有没有问题
However,due to many reasons represented by the poor quality,Chinese rice only making up less than 5% of the international rice trade.
然而,我国水稻的国际贸易额由于品质等原因在世界上只占到5%以下.

答案

However,due to poor quality and other factors,Chinese rice only makes up less than 5% of the international rice trade.1.due to本身就有由于什么原因的意思,所以不需要用due to many reasons,语义重复.2.make...