我写了一篇介绍上海和杭州的文章,希望英语学的好的帮我改改好吗?

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我写了一篇介绍上海和杭州的文章,希望英语学的好的帮我改改好吗?
Good morning everyone,today I will introduce the city where we will travel,is Shanghai and Hangzhou.
Shanghai is the most beautiful and recognized the most clean city in our country.
High building is everywhere,shanghai’s night scene is very beautifully,the Orient Pearl Tower is the third tall in the world,it’s about 468 m.And the jinmao tower,This incredible tower is the tallest building on China's mainland (421m).Its design combines traditional Chinese and gothic architecture.
If you are not afraid of heights,going to the top of the Jinmao Tower is an interesting experience.Viewing from the dizzying heights of the 88th floor in the evening,you will have an illusion that Shanghai is a glittering light ball.On the 87th floor,a bar,the Cloud Nine,gives you the feeling of being in the clouds – sometimes there is no view at all because you're surrounded by them.
OK,the next is Hangzhou,Hangzhou is the most appropriate for people to live,there have one lake named Xihu,Xihu is very large and beautiful,and there have the best tea named Longjin.
Shanghai have a lot of famous food,the Steamed Bread with Chicken,Ribs with Rice Cake,Fried Steamed Bread and any other delicious food are waiting for you!

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Good morning,everyone,today I will introduce the cities where we will travel.They are Shanghai and Hangzhou.Shanghai is recognized the most beautiful and cleanest city in our country.There are highris...