求英语好的帮我检查一下这段文字是否有错

题目

求英语好的帮我检查一下这段文字是否有错
We should focus on students' moral education,and improve the level of moral education,improve the mode of moral education.
In the first place,school authorities should take different pertinence education according to the difference of students
Secondly,the school should pay attention to moral education in daily life of students
In the end,schools should carry out a series of activities to create education and civilization,in order to promote moral education.
We also should renew educational concept.In order to update the concept of education,we should primarily improve teachers' quality.
First,teachers should own a good character of person.The attitude teacher treats the work and communicates will subtly change students' values.
Secondly,the teacher should love his own discipline.Teachers should love his own professor disciplines,and transfer love to the students.Teachers should not only pass the students' enthusiasm,also passion of exploring.
Finally,teacher should pay attention to the attitudes to students.Teacher should be patience and confidence to students,thus let the students believe in their ability.The teacher be full of love to student,love is students' motivation to learn.

答案

We should focus on students' moral education to improve the level of moral education.
Firstly, school authorities should provide different pertinent education according to the different students.
We also should renew educational conception.
The attitude teacher who treats the work and communicates will subtly change students' values.
Teachers should not only pass the students' enthusiasm, but also enlighten their passion of exploring.
thus let students believe in their ability.
Teachers are full of love to student; love is students' motivation to learn.