大家帮我看看这段英语有没有错

题目

大家帮我看看这段英语有没有错
My) Dear friend,
Do you still remember me?How are you doing these days?
I'm now a junior 2 student.My school is the best in my city,which lies on Culture Road.My school is so large that there are many students in it.And most students here are very excellent.
I have a happy family because Dad is very humorous.Mum is a little strict with me,but she cares about me a lot.
There are too many exams which bring some pressure in me,so I am fond of listening to music to relax myself.
Hope that you can write back soon.
And wish you happy and healthy!
Yours,
XXX

答案

1.I'm now a junior 2 student （好象没这说法,应为I am a student in grade two of junior middle school)
2.which lies on Culture Road (besides/at a side of Cultural Road)
3.There are too many exams which bring some pressure in (用on)
写得不错.