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改一篇英文作文
My presentation experience
Obviously this is not my first time doing the presentation.But this is the first time I have a group discuss with so many different nationalities.This is quite challenge for me.
Before do the group presentation,we have separated our work.Everyone have different parts to do.I am doing the target audience.The tutor tells us to be more specified.As our business id bakery shop I tried to observe who will buy the pastries and cakes in my area.I find out both young and old people like to purchase.And women are more prefer this stuff than men do.By reason of our main product is organic cake we decide to target the working class female between age group 20-40.
When I was doing the PowerPoint slides,I feel lack of evidence of market for the target audience.A website that teacher said come to my mind.I search the database
find the demographic of Nottingham.The largest age group is exactly what we are going to target.
When doing the pres

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My presentation experience Obviously this is not my first time doing presentation.I always remember the first time I worked in a group with people from different countries.It was quite a challenge for...