请问这段英语是否能正确表达以下的中文意思

题目

请问这段英语是否能正确表达以下的中文意思
想表达:既然我们可以从这种做法里得到很多好处,而我们中一些人没有意识到这点(PS:指从中得到好处),我们需要采取一些行动去改变这种情况(PS:指一些人没意识到可以从中得到好处)
下面这段英语是否能表达上面汉语的意思?关键是逻辑有没问题
considering that we can get much benefit from such practice with some of us being not aware of it,we should take some actions to change this situation

答案

Now that we can get many benefits from this practice,and some of us don't realize it ,we need to take some actions to change this situation