哪位高人可以改一下以下文章中的语法错误,时态和连接词等~改完了发上来吧^^

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哪位高人可以改一下以下文章中的语法错误,时态和连接词等~改完了发上来吧^^
I felt a sense of being discriminated every time I heard of the saying—A woman’s reaction in any crisis is to scream.According to this,it seems that a woman can neither control herself nor figure out some revolutions when trapped in difficult or urgent situations,all she could do is to scream which is noisy and useless.
Instinctively I don’t agree with the opinion,It is a truth that man and woman are different in many ways,so it’s not strange that we react to the same thing differently.Since men can usually do a better job at leading,when the problems arouse they give everybody suggestions,even of every step we should take to get out of the difficulties.Because men have the ability to do such a good job,women need to worry about nothing.Furthermore,it’s the male’s duty to protect the female,so sometimes women scream or do incomprehensible things to attract others’ attention,showing that they need to be protected.
We women don’t need to

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I felt a sense of being discriminated every time I heard of the saying—A woman’s reaction in any crisis is to scream. According to this, it seems that a woman can neither control herself nor figure out some resolutions when trapped in difficult or urgent situations and all she could do is to scream, which is noisy and useless.
Instinctively I don’t agree with the opinion, It is true that men and women are different in many ways, so it’s not strange that we react to the same thing differently. Since men can usually do a better job at leading, when the problems arouse, they give everybody suggestions, even every step we should take to get out of the difficulties. Because men have the ability to do such a good job, women need to worry about nothing. Furthermore, it’s the male’s duty to protect the female, so sometimes women scream or do incomprehensible things to attract others’ attention, showing that they need to be protected.
We women don’t need to deal with the crisis, but it doesn’t mean we can not, Faced with crisis, we are not always screaming. The passage has given us an example of how calm a woman is when she is threatened by great danger.
It’s true that women can do a lot other than scream , and we just need to fight a running battle to prove it.