基础很差,帮忙修改一篇英语作文,方便我能学习一些语法知识.谢谢

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基础很差,帮忙修改一篇英语作文,方便我能学习一些语法知识.谢谢
请根据下面提示写一篇短文简要介绍网络红人朱之文. 1. 一位勤劳、才华横溢的农民歌唱家轰动了全世界. 2. 由于出身贫寒他几乎没有受到正规的学校教育但是却对音乐十分痴迷.不论风雨严寒他总是在当地的小树林里、河堤上、田野中纵情歌唱. 3. 他心地善良扶危济困.对周围的动物情有独钟院子里的鸡、鹅成了他的忠实听众. 4. 他的毅力和决心终于有了回报继英国版的苏珊大妈之后他获得了中国“苏珊大叔”的称号.


There is a hard work peasant who is called Uncle Susan of China.Just like Aunt Susan ,his voick was so attractive that shocked the world.
Because of born to poor,he almost never recieved the education in ferular school.But he is so crazy in music.No matter windy,rainy or cold days.He always sings in local wood.
He always help the poor man with a kind heart.he has eyes only for the animals.The chicken and goose in the yard that to be the loyal audience of him.
.In return to his determination and perseverance,he is more and more popular now.

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