帮忙~英语作文挑错~或者是哪看着别扭

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帮忙~英语作文挑错~或者是哪看着别扭
I met my wife totally by accident, but I fell in love with her at the first sight.
It was a delightful winter night, no cold wind and the bothersome noise, that I decided to hang out to relax my poor nerves tightened by those work affairs for a long time.
Staring on my shadow under street lamps which turned long and short, I could even hear the shadow’s cheers for such a cheerful break from the heavy work. “Oh, it must have shortened my lifetime.” Thinking of the work, I complained.
“Don’t worry, you will live long.” A woman’s voice came to me suddenly.
I turned around straightway, and there was a tall girl dressed in white standing right by me. Her hair waterfall against the light-coloured skin hangs down and her attractive eyes catched my attention.
“I’m Xie Bi-an and would you do me a favour?” she said.
“Of course. What is it?”
“I get lost with my brother, who is a little short with dark skin. Could you help me look for him? You

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括号里的是修改后的词,有些是替换前面的一个词,有些是补充的I met my wife totally by accident, but I fell in love with her at the first sight. It was a delightful winter night, no cold wind and （and 改为...