一篇英语作文,非常感谢你.

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一篇英语作文,非常感谢你.
My Valuable Present
Last Sunday,I had my birthday.I received a special present from my Dad.It was a dictionary.It was thick and colourful.I was amazed to see the thing and opened it on my own.On the first page,I saw a sentence:Where there is a will,there is a way.I decided to look up words in it and learned it with my heart.I do believe if I tried my best to learn English,I will succeed.So it's a valuable present in my mind.

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My Valuable PresentLast Sunday,I had my birthday.I received a special present which was bought by(加上了定于从句) my Dad.Opening the present,I was amamzed(用了非谓,在句中很提分).（要注意语序,先打开,才...