这里是一篇自己写的四级作文,不知道哪里都有问题,还请各位看看,

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这里是一篇自己写的四级作文,不知道哪里都有问题,还请各位看看,
The Imoprtance of Keeping a Good Mood
Nowadays ,with the development of economy,people must face constantly work and a lot of difficulties so that live with pressure everyday. the phenomenon that people haven't motive to do in daily life is very commom.
Moreover ,people think many ways to solve the problem. so people consider that the importance of keeping a good mood .
As far as i concerned ,keep a good mood is very important. on the one hand ,it can help
us to keep a good heathy, it's known that psychological heathy is important so keep a good mood is very important.on the other hand,it can help us to improve us work. if you have a good,you will have motive to do you r work. in our daily life,we must keep a good mood,it can make us happy everyday.and a good attitude towards life.

答案

关于心态的,题材不错98分.