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Do you know diabetes is a disease that often called lifestyle disease?(Faddis,2007).And do you know nowadays researchers are using animals to treat diabetes?As you know,people using animals to treat diabetes are terrible,but it is true.Yes,diabetes spreads everywhere in the world and it becomes the second serious health problem to human beings,and also diabetes can lead to serious,long-term medical consequences in millions of people,such as heart disease,hypertension,and blindness.As human beings,people should protect animals,not kill animals,we cannot be so selfish,animals are also have they own life.How can people be so rude and kill them for their skin or sell in order to cure people's health problems.That is unfair!Trough research it found that diabetes can be treated if a person exercises more and keep a good balanced diet.
Diabetes is becoming a lifestyle disease and it may causes many health problems such as heart disease,obesity,high blood cholesterol level etc.As to say this,researchers found that dogs show clinical signs of diabetes similar to humans and
it is easy to find out the effective treatment in human beings."Dogs show clinical signs of diabetes similar to humans and clinical signs include increased urination,thirst,hunger and weight loss" (Adams,2011,Para 6).And for the researchers,it was a successful and inspiring thing.It can help them to make a further research,also,they
use "an equipment for trace the diabetes in dogs can be adapted by human".(Adams,2011).In the future,the researchers think that the device for monitoring glucose will be more effective,it maybe help to treat diabetes in human being.So,diabetes is not a serious problem to human beings.But do you think that it is a right way to treat diabetes by using animals?
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Do you know diabetes is a disease that often called lifestyle disease?(Faddis,2007).And do you know nowadays researchers are using animals to treat diabetes?As you know,people using animals to treat d...
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