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作文改分
假设你是班长李明,你们班的英语口语老师KEVIN已完成教学任务准备回伦敦.请你根据下列要点内容给他写一封电子邮件.
（1）上他的课非常愉快.
（2）他总是组织很多课堂活动,让大家积极参与.
（3）他常鼓励大家不要害羞,要大胆开口,增强了大家用于表达英语的信心.
（4）他经常说“We should never give up”.给大家留下了深刻印象.
（5）希望他能再到广州来.
Do you remember the frist class,You looked like a foreigner with bule eyes and golden hairs.You are very nice.So we enjoy your class because it`s fun.
You alway encourage us to be brave to speak english for making our heart stronger.However you make so many exercises and lets us ioin in.
The sentence you alway say is "We should never give up".We make great expression for it.And this sentence help us go over the diffcults.
You are a good teacher.I hope you can come to GuangZhou again.
开头和结尾都给出了的 上面是我写的 大家按照正常的评分标准来评就可以了 另外可以的话指点下我写作文

答案

class后边应为问好,他本来就是外国人look like?nice后边直接so,可以fun和nice合并成为一个理由,so我们喜欢.always漏了s,encourage应为过去时,english为大写English专有名词,for后边跟前面没有因果关系.however表示转...