新托福IBT文章求改Has the technology made a better world

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新托福IBT文章求改Has the technology made a better world
As the rapid industrialization and development of modern sciences and technologies,our lives have been dramatically changed in almost every respect than ever before.Notwithstanding there is much disagreement over this question that whether modern technology has made the world a better place for us to live or virtually has accelerated the devastation of human beings,I still strongly believe that if we can take the advantage of modern sciences and technologies which is regarded as a two-edge sword in a proper way,we can not only solve the present crisis caused by them with sustainable and scientific solutions,but also continue human beings' prosperity and make our offspring’s' tomorrow much better.
As I have mentioned above,modern sciences and technologies have reformed our lives to great extend,and they do have benefited us in the same time.for instance,as the revolution in transportation vehicles,from bicycles to automobiles,from sailboats to huge cruises,from commercial airplanes to spaceships and so on and so forth,human beings as a whole has been able to touch the mysterious areas of the world even of the university much more than ever before.And in addition,following the progress of modern transportation vehicles,globalization has been rapidly accelerated including the boom of tourisms around the world,which has a great impact on the transition of global economy by creating more opportunities and jobs.Another case in point is the development of modern medicine and biology as it not only expand the average life span of modern people,but as well increase the quality of our daily lives.Specifically,TB that once an incurable disease,which has threatened a great number of people's lives,now has been conquered by new discovery in modern medicine.
But in spite of the inspiring contributions that modern technologies made to our lives,it is still an undeniable fact that they also have created more problems meanwhile,which are more complex and challenging than those we faced ever before and some of them may even threat the survival of all human beings.For example,an severe issue that has drawn attentions of many countries is energy crisis.With the most efficient tools and advanced technologies of all time,we have tapped and exploited most of natural resources such as oil which need at least 2 million years to be accumulated with various geochemical processes.At the same moment,people that live in the era of industrialization and globalization have quickened up the consume of energy,which leads to a worse situation.
In conclusion,modern technology has changed the lives of human beings and to some extent made the world much better,although it caused a series of problems too.And I strongly believe that we still need to develop our sciences and technologies with a rational and sustainable attitude,as only in this way can we make up our mistakes and continue the civilization of human beings.

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