substantive editing 和 detailed editing for sense 分别怎么翻译?

题目

substantive editing 和 detailed editing for sense 分别怎么翻译?
原句子：
1、 Substantive editing aims to improve the overall coverage and presentation of a piece of writing.
2、 Detailed editing for sense is concerned with whether each section expresses the author's meaning clearly,without gaps and contradictions.

答案

substantive指的是“大量的”,在这里因该以为“略”或者是“泛”,如：略读、泛读.
Detailed 指的是“详尽的”,在这里因该译为“精”,如：精读.