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改错题: 
After several publishers had returned the manuscript as unpublishable ,the author no longer knew anyone whom to send it .
Many centuries prior the Norman invasion :the Romans have conquered Britain ,and remaind there for almost four centuries .
The president mentioned to the cabinet members he was going to negotiate a new treaty with the foreign minister .
He was standing quietly when presently a young woman ,who had been combing her hair and watched him ,approached and asked him for directions .
Sarah said she heard someone in the attic ,but we didn't find someone .
The prices of homes are very high that most people cannot afford to buy them .
At the next faculty meeting ,some of the proffessors want to discuss about the teaching schedule for the new semester .
Despite the fact that the Southt Pole is as snow-covered and stormy-weathered as the North Pole ,is colder than the North pole .
汉译英:
他虽然很富有却很少帮助穷人.(用as)
我就出生在去年你参观过的那个

答案

1 whom去掉
2 have-had
3 第一个to去掉
4 watched-watching
5 最后一个someone-anyone/anybody
6 buy去掉
7 At-in
8 is colder 前加上it
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He rarely helps the poor as he is so rich
I was born in the city you just visited last year
We have more students than the other classes
无聊来回答你,这些题目都是NC老师出的.翻译题更不用说,能表达出意思即可,没有标准答案,就那么几句简单的话,能用N种译文