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麻烦帮我看一下语法错误
1.Secondly, the Postgraduate Public English curriculum on the type of class is similar to undergraduate college English, the curriculum design is single and backward, many school generally only open the intensive reading and listening, rarely also have other courses such as writing.
2.The other teachers consider that postgraduate is high level talents, their independent learning ability is stronger, there is not necessary to force students to go to class, so the postgraduates' English course should be selective.
3.Moreover, the teacher's teaching method is single, they generally use the traditional teaching method, which the teacher is centered in class, reading and translation teaching is the main line, books and the blackboard are medium.
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1.class 和 curriculum 是近义字,二选一以免拖沓;单调==>dull/monotonous,过时outmoded;最後一句需补字The type of postgraduate public English curriculum is similar to the undergraduate one.This kind of curr...