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1.Responsible for all external publicity materials both in Chinese and English,such as PPT,DVD and the company profiles,product-sheets.Lead our team to participate in 06 international financial exhibitions,06 UMT Planning Exhibition in Nanjing,07 India's financial exhibition.Collect customer information and analysis it to make out marketing project.
2.Establish the company's Knowledge base and collect marketing information.Making new product questionnaire for R& D to survey and analysis,according to this information,our team organize and plan of new product launches.Including invited guests,demonstration of new product,exhibition layout.(Due to excellent performance,I was assigned to Taiwan for operating training during half a month,the mainly job is to communicate with the front-line customers.I visited Taiwan Post Office,Hua Nan Bank,Taishin Bank and the Taipei MRT.)
1.Domestic and international sales:responsible for the production Price,cost accounting,withdrawal duty,export commodity inspection and export law arrangement,customer promotion.Dear with domestic and foreign customers visiting and meeting arrangement,reception work.Audit all the sales contract,payment and call letter,participate in Beijing,Nanjing metro tender,we made tender documentations,tender Q&A,tender costs schedule.Manage international sales and L/C,exports of goods,export declarations and letters of credit.During three years of work,there is no L/C be dishonored.
2.Support India branch:as a window of overseas supporter,exchange the technical and operational experience to the Indian subsidiary,at the same time,provide technical or financial support.Regularly inspect the updated technology and storage management.Draw up full set of sales dep.operation ISO documents.Our team particularly obtained a written praise that surveyed the custom satisfaction questionnaire by Det Norske Veritas.
As an international purchaser to buy the important foreign materials and parts,mainly in Japan and the European countries.Timely payment and deal with the badly goods and to make out return policy issues with supplier.

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1.Responsible for all external publicity materials both in Chinese and English,such as PPT,DVD and the company profiles,product-sheets.Lead our team to participate in 06 international financial exhibitions,06 UMT Planning Exhibition in Nanjing,07 India's financial exhibition.Collect customer information and (analysis) analyze it to make out marketing project.
2.Establish the company's Knowledge base and collect marketing information.Making new product questionnaire for R& D to survey and analysis,according to (this) the information,our team organize and plan (of去掉) new product launches.Including inviting （invited） guests,demonstration of new product,exhibition layout.(Due to excellent performance,I was assigned to Taiwan for operating training （during）for half a month,the main (mainly) job is to communicate with the front-line customers.I visited Taiwan Post Office,Hua Nan Bank,Taishin Bank and the Taipei MRT.)
1.Domestic and international sales:responsible for the production Price,cost accounting,withdrawal duty,export commodity inspection and export law arrangement,customer promotion.(Dear) deal with domestic and foreign visiting customers and meeting arrangement,reception work.Audit all the sales contract,payment and call letter,participate in Beijing,Nanjing metro tender,we made tender documentations,tender Q&A,tender costs schedule.Manage international sales and L/C,exports of goods,export declarations and letters of credit.During three years of work,there is no L/C be dishonored.
2.Support India branch:as a window of overseas supporter,exchange the technical and operational experience (to)with the Indian subsidiary,at the same time,provide technical or financial support.Regularly inspect the updated technology and storage management.Draw up full set of sales dep.operation ISO documents.Our team particularly obtained a written praise that surveyed the custom satisfaction questionnaire by Det Norske Veritas.
As an international purchaser to buy the important foreign materials and parts,mainly in Japan and the European countries.Timely payment and deal with the (badly)bad goods and to make out