谁帮我改改英语作文哦 只要把错误指出来 帮我改正就行哦~

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谁帮我改改英语作文哦 只要把错误指出来 帮我改正就行哦~
I learned English since I was in grade four.At the beginning,I was not very good at English,so my mother supervise me to learn English every day.For one year’s effort,I gain great advance at English,especially at my spoken English.
When I was in junior high school,my English teacher had been a interpreter,thus her spoken English was very good.I liked her method of teaching English very much.My English improved at a high speed and often won first place at that time.
In my senior high school,My teacher didn’t pay much attention at our ability of using English at practice.She force us to do a lot of exercise to cope with English exam.I losed my interest to English.
Now I was in college,I have to supervise my own study without the help of my mother and teacher.
没写完 先帮我改着这些 大家一起提高英语哦

答案

have been learning;supervised; After one year's effort,I made a great progress in English,especially in my spoken English;"an" interpreter;and "I" often won first place;pay attention "to";in practice,forced,exercises,English exams,lost my interests in English,now i "am" in college,studies,and my teachers...
按顺序来的哈,没把每句写出来了~加油~