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求求求求懂雅思的好心的老师帮我细批一下这篇小作文 100分悬赏 加100分附加
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The table illustrates the figure on how much consumer spend on different aspects in five separates countries in 2002.
The expenditure on food/drink/tobacco takes up 32.14% of total expenditure in turkey.But,while that makes up about 15.77%.As for the other four countries ,all of their figure between rough 30% to 15%.
9% of total expenditure is distributed into clothing/footwear in Italy .However,that occupay only 5.4% in Span.The figure for the rest three countries ,similarly,stand at around 6%.
Turkish spend 4.35% of their total expenditure on leisure/education ,which is followed by that of Sweden (3.22%) ,Italy(3.20%) and Ireland (2.21%).The figure for Span only represent 1.98%.

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