明天就考四级了,请帮我改篇作文吧!谢谢!

题目

明天就考四级了,请帮我改篇作文吧!谢谢!
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1）近年来出现大学生就业难的现象
2）产生这一现象的原因
3）如何解决这一问题
College Students' Job Hunting
With respect to the phenomenon that college students nowadays have more difficulty in finding a job with a decent pay or a job which meets their essential needs, I assume that we need to have an insight into it.
As there is a growing concern over the problem among the public, I reckon that these simple but thought-provoking reasons account for it. Topping the list is that the job opportunities have decreased in recent years on account of the global economic crisis. Only if companies reduce the number of the posts and excute some redundancies can they readily adapt themselves to the new circumstances. In addition, the high requirements of a job play an indispensable role as well. Considering that more and more students have a tendency to find a job, companies are quite delighted in that they are more liable to select better emplyees by means of improving the requirements of a job.
In dealing with this problem, I believe that not only student's own capacity is taken into consideration, but the government is also responsible for it. What the government needs to do is to implement some policies to reduce the rate of umemployment and underemployment, but not to leave the students to their own devices or turn a blind eye to the serious phenomenon. Undoubtedly, we students should also broaden our horizen, open up our mind, strengthen our spiritual construction, and so forth. Only in this way can we get rid of unemployment and contribute to the socialist modernization.
这是英语普通4级,不是专四.

答案

不好意思,因为我已经已经工作了,周五晚上睡的就比较早,没看到你的留言.没考过四级,不知道你现在考完了没有,希望顺利.其实四级还是专四的作文没什么区别.主要要求还是把事情说清楚,没有语法错误而已.我看到你比较喜欢...