以上得到的结论 英语是the above mentioned conclusion还是the conclusion mentioned above

题目

以上得到的结论 英语是the above mentioned conclusion还是the conclusion mentioned above
1 为什么我写的是 reaching the above mentioned conclusion does not mean…… 老师要我改为reaching the conclusion mentioned above does not mean……
2 为什么我写的是only by paying more atonly by paying more attention to practical subjects can not solve the problem fundamentally 老师要我改成 only by paying more attention to practical subjects can not be solved the problem fundamentally 是不是only放在句首要倒装啊

答案

1,老师改过的使得句子看起来更紧凑.但你的说法也绝对没错.2,only在句首时的确要倒装.但是只需要把第一动词放到前面即可.可是你的老师把整个动词can not be solved 都放过去了,感觉不妥.你看看这样是不是好些：only b...