求英语大师 帮帮小弟我改改作文吧

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求英语大师 帮帮小弟我改改作文吧
AN important change
change is important for us,I has an important change in three years, I choosed to playing the piano , I wished to become a musician but my home was poor. IT couldn't let me to afford piano. I deponded on harding study.More and more quickly over time.my home also become have wealth. beause I harded sudy.I had my own piano .I was look happy . I thingk of the change that make me old is importangt
This is one of my very important change

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An Important Change
Change is important for us,I had an important change in three years ago, I choosed to play the piano , I wished to became a musician but my family was poor. So that couldn't let me to afford piano. I deponded on harding study.More and more quickly over time.my family also became had wealth, beause I harded sudy.I had my own piano now .I was very happy . I thingk of the change that make me important.
This is my important change.
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