Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in.I greeted her

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Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in.I greeted her with a warmly smile and talked with her in English.The young lady,who called her Judy,came from Canada.she told me that it was the first time she has been in China and so far she had enjoined her stay there.All the people she met in the country were friendly for her.In the late afternoon I showed her around our town.After she left,Judy thanked me for my kind.Besides,she praised me for my spoken English.
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Last Sunday I was helping my father in his teahouse when a foreign visitor entered in（1、去掉in）.I greeted her with a warmly（2、改为warm） smile and talked with her in English.The young lady,who ca...