好心人帮我看看语法有错么.

题目

好心人帮我看看语法有错么.
The National Day is coming .I am very happy.I want to do something interesting. For example,reading a magazine and going sightseeing in the zoo.Jinan is famous for Spring.I thought about going to see the spring,but decided on spending the vacation by the sea.I heard that Qingdao is very beautiful.We are leaving for Qingdao on 2nd of October.We are staying there for about 2 days.I am planning to visit my aunt .She likes shopping.So I am going shopping with her.I hope I can forget all my problems.
I want a relaxing vacation.

答案

For example,reading a magazine and going sightseeing in the zoo.这句话里面,for example 是要加完整的句子,你后面用到的两个都是短语而已,应该改为read a magazing and go sightseeing in the zoo;Jinan is famo...