大家帮我改一篇英语作文 按照中考标准改

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大家帮我改一篇英语作文 按照中考标准改
我们这个作文满分15 有的错误我也不知道问什么错
My class has sixty students .There are thirty one boys and twenty nine girls.For relaxed ways.Different sthdents have different ways .Many students like watching TV to relax.Let me see ,There are thirty students like watching TV .I don not agree with this way.I think it is bad for our eyes.And it probably influences our study.Some students play computer games at free time .I think it don not let you relaxed .It only makes you feel tired.A few students listen music and do exercise.I think do exercise is the best way to relax .It don not only make you relaxed but also keep healthy with you.I think we should do exercise at free time,And some students don not have time to relax.

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